Autumn 1st Attempt At Haiku

what my eyes behold
autumn trees giving color
    winter right behind
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Palanichamy Avatar
April 17, 2011 at 10:00 PM
loved it ...
A   Avatar
February 1, 2011 at 7:57 AM
I love the attempt nature gives here.. Oo. unless u mean your first attempt at haiku.. well either way I can see it from both sides... the side winter making an attempt.. for autumn.. enjoyed
Horsman Avatar
January 30, 2011 at 11:57 PM
Oh boy, this is good. Harry
Dietrich Avatar
January 30, 2011 at 10:03 PM
Very good for first time. Keep it up!
Mehta Avatar
January 30, 2011 at 1:53 PM
Nice transition of the seasons you have captured well, Robert
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