Autumn

Rivers  dream by summer's end
first spongy mists swallow the valleys
leaves show  their colour beauty

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

October 10, 2009 at 10:45 PM

Fall is such a colorful time of the year. God's painting upon the landscape. And your poem captures the essence of autumn's delight. This is a very nice haiku, Gert. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Charmaine Chircop

September 25, 2009 at 7:34 AM

what a haiku,excellent my friend-Charma

Dorian Petersen Potter

September 25, 2009 at 12:33 AM

Beautiful Haiku!

Marcus Crane

September 24, 2009 at 2:52 PM

you have created such a beautiful image of the autumn .. great imagery gert .. thank you for sharing your poetry . Marco

Carolyn Devonshire

September 24, 2009 at 6:52 AM

Brilliant imagery! Makes me think of the sun clearing from the Smokey Mountains, revealing the colorful landscape below. Wonderfuly haiku, Gert! Love, Carolyn

P Sheart

September 24, 2009 at 6:45 AM

Hi Gert Oh so beautiful! I love the thought of rivers dreaming. I could wrap myself up in that thought. Thanks so much for your comment and reading through my poetry. Bless your heart. I've made a new friend here, how about that! You-ve motivated me to start on #80. I had 40 additional lyrics too but took them off feeling like lyrics poetry don't really mix for various reasons. Take care Blessings to you and yours. Love Light Truth Patricia