Autumn

Rivers dream by summer's end first spongy mists swallow the valleys leaves show their colour beauty

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 10/10/2009 10:45:00 PM

Fall is such a colorful time of the year. God's painting upon the landscape. And your poem captures the essence of autumn's delight. This is a very nice haiku, Gert. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/25/2009 7:34:00 AM

what a haiku,excellent my friend-Charma

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 9/25/2009 12:33:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku!

Marcus Crane

Date: 9/24/2009 2:52:00 PM

you have created such a beautiful image of the autumn .. great imagery gert .. thank you for sharing your poetry . Marco

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/24/2009 6:52:00 AM

Brilliant imagery! Makes me think of the sun clearing from the Smokey Mountains, revealing the colorful landscape below. Wonderfuly haiku, Gert! Love, Carolyn

P Sheart

Date: 9/24/2009 6:45:00 AM

Hi Gert Oh so beautiful! I love the thought of rivers dreaming. I could wrap myself up in that thought. Thanks so much for your comment and reading through my poetry. Bless your heart. I've made a new friend here, how about that! You-ve motivated me to start on #80. I had 40 additional lyrics too but took them off feeling like lyrics poetry don't really mix for various reasons. Take care Blessings to you and yours. Love Light Truth Patricia

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/24/2009 5:00:00 AM

I love the descriptiveness in this one. I can just see that river and the spongy mist. Keep writing. Sara