Autumn

Autumn


Look how far I’ve fallen,
Like leaves falling from a tree.
Just falling…
Feeling Orange…
Feeling Green…
Feeling Brown…

Falling from Mother Earth…

Experiencing ‘autumn’ in the summertime.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Goff Avatar
July 26, 2009 at 8:57 PM
welcome to the soup! Monique! love the images!! jim
Plocica Avatar
July 23, 2009 at 9:50 AM
COOL POEM! Very Mature like, LOL! I'm 11, I'm new too, and i LOVE your poem!
Mckenzie Avatar
July 22, 2009 at 5:30 PM
Well done I love your association to nature and the feelings you described! Welcome to the family at the soup! Laura :)
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July 22, 2009 at 5:04 PM
Interesting perspective in this concise poem. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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