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Autumn

Autumn Look how far I’ve fallen, Like leaves falling from a tree. Just falling… Feeling Orange… Feeling Green… Feeling Brown… Falling from Mother Earth… Experiencing ‘autumn’ in the summertime.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/26/2009 8:57:00 PM
welcome to the soup! Monique! love the images!! jim
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Date: 7/23/2009 9:50:00 AM
COOL POEM! Very Mature like, LOL! I'm 11, I'm new too, and i LOVE your poem!
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Date: 7/22/2009 5:30:00 PM
Well done I love your association to nature and the feelings you described! Welcome to the family at the soup! Laura :)
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Date: 7/22/2009 5:04:00 PM
Interesting perspective in this concise poem. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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