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Ascending number of waves flow Ultimate beads of ripples grow Tensionless journey through the wind Onto dry sand it smiles and grins Politely moisting nearby rocks Intricate rainbows form on docks Laudable detail with each splash Ornate sea treasures in a cache These depths of matter can flummox.

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Date: 12/22/2017 1:07:00 PM
This is a delightfully written poem, Tamara. There are moments when we drive on autopilot, but nature does that all the time! ~ Regards // paul
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Tamara Hopkins
Date: 1/17/2018 3:53:00 AM
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on this! (I'm a rather big fan of your poems) - Cheers, Tamara

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