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Autmn In Hawaii

As the leaves begin to fall on this Autumn season of mine 
I sit by my window and sip on a glass of Chardonnay wine
Wrapping a shawl around my frail shoulders I sit and long 
for the days when I was vivacious, beautiful and strong 

The misty morning clouds have parted gently in the sky 
I'm lost in the memory of a friend that abruptly had to fly 
She lived miles away in a warm land where flowers glow   
beneath a yellow hibiscus sun, where pineapples grow   

I try and picture her beneath a Koa tree of fervent bloom
and while the sun is setting here inside my heated room 
A tiny bird fly's by, she's a brownie soft majestic cisticola 
I imagine its Connie waving her hand and saying, Aloha! 

As the leaves turn burnt orange and red with amber blush  
I recall the things she said from her soul of golden plush
Life is made up of many seasons as Autumn turns to gold  
my heart recalls and in my mind, she will never grow old.

Oct 14, 2022, Sponsor	Suzanne Delaney
Contest Name	In Remembrance of Connie -Autumn Theme
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Maverick Avatar
November 4, 2022 at 10:28 AM
Dear Connie.' I will write for her but not just Yet..' great tribute Rose.)
Alex Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 5:51 AM
"A tiny bird fly's by, she's a brownie soft majestic cisticola I imagine its Connie waving her hand and saying, Aloha!" -The entire poen is beautiful. Congratulations!
Delaney Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 1:16 PM
Thanks for you beautiful lines, Vie in memory and tribute to Connie: “Life is made up of many seasons as Autumn turns to gold my heart recalls and in my mind, she will never grow old.” These lines rang true for me. Autumn Blessings, SuZ
Rose  Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 2:01 PM
Thank you for honoring my poem Suzanne
Legros Kelley Avatar
October 17, 2022 at 2:31 PM
So beautiful. I imagine her in beauty and light, and I bet she will meet us on the other side of the golden tide. Your poem is incredibly loving. Hugs to you Mystic Rose <3
Leffanta Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 11:26 AM
Well said and done! Millions would be delighted to share Connie's window view of humpback whales cavorting in the ocean!
Buhagiar Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 7:37 AM
Beautiful poem inn honour of Connie. We all miss her. Your poem is sweet and full of images. Well done.
Rose  Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 9:25 AM
Thank you for dropping in Victor, she will always be remembered in our hearts
Meadows Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 6:23 AM
A lovely poem. Well written.
Rose  Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 9:25 AM
Thank you for stopping by dear Jeanette
Pandit Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 5:41 AM
Beautiful images of autumn, Vienna. You honor Connie with this lovely poem.
Rose  Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 9:24 AM
Thank you, Vijay, God bless
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