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Autmn In Hawaii

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As the leaves begin to fall on this Autumn season of mine I sit by my window and sip on a glass of Chardonnay wine Wrapping a shawl around my frail shoulders I sit and long for the days when I was vivacious, beautiful and strong The misty morning clouds have parted gently in the sky I'm lost in the memory of a friend that abruptly had to fly She lived miles away in a warm land where flowers glow beneath a yellow hibiscus sun, where pineapples grow I try and picture her beneath a Koa tree of fervent bloom and while the sun is setting here inside my heated room A tiny bird fly's by, she's a brownie soft majestic cisticola I imagine its Connie waving her hand and saying, Aloha! As the leaves turn burnt orange and red with amber blush I recall the things she said from her soul of golden plush Life is made up of many seasons as Autumn turns to gold my heart recalls and in my mind, she will never grow old. Oct 14, 2022, Sponsor Suzanne Delaney Contest Name In Remembrance of Connie -Autumn Theme

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Date: 11/4/2022 10:28:00 AM
Dear Connie.' I will write for her but not just Yet..' great tribute Rose.)
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Date: 10/22/2022 5:51:00 AM
"A tiny bird fly's by, she's a brownie soft majestic cisticola I imagine its Connie waving her hand and saying, Aloha!" -The entire poen is beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/21/2022 1:16:00 PM
Thanks for you beautiful lines, Vie in memory and tribute to Connie: “Life is made up of many seasons as Autumn turns to gold my heart recalls and in my mind, she will never grow old.” These lines rang true for me. Autumn Blessings, SuZ
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Date: 10/22/2022 2:01:00 PM
Thank you for honoring my poem Suzanne
Date: 10/17/2022 2:31:00 PM
So beautiful. I imagine her in beauty and light, and I bet she will meet us on the other side of the golden tide. Your poem is incredibly loving. Hugs to you Mystic Rose <3
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Date: 10/14/2022 11:26:00 AM
Well said and done! Millions would be delighted to share Connie's window view of humpback whales cavorting in the ocean!
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Date: 10/14/2022 7:37:00 AM
Beautiful poem inn honour of Connie. We all miss her. Your poem is sweet and full of images. Well done.
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Date: 10/14/2022 9:25:00 AM
Thank you for dropping in Victor, she will always be remembered in our hearts
Date: 10/14/2022 6:23:00 AM
A lovely poem. Well written.
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Date: 10/14/2022 9:25:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by dear Jeanette
Date: 10/14/2022 5:41:00 AM
Beautiful images of autumn, Vienna. You honor Connie with this lovely poem.
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Date: 10/14/2022 9:24:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay, God bless

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