Aurora

Aurora wears fine lace
Alighting from pale night…
Amethyst her morn’s gown;
Against a floral stage
As she paints nature…bold !
Artist , Goddess of dawn
Adored by lit seasons.


Pleiades form--Contest 228
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Merryman Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 2:01 PM
Gorgeous imagery, Nette! Congrats on your well written Pleiades! Thank you for supporting my contest. Blessings!
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 2:52 PM
Soup mail. Congratulations on your wonderful win Nette! 7 ; )
Warrior Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 12:51 PM
Came back to Congrats!!!...well done my friend...god bless...^WW^
Callus Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 9:52 AM
Your laced Aurora is indeed adorable, Nette! A deserving winning poem...congratulations!! Hugs // paul
Allison Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 9:39 AM
Such beautiful imagery Nette congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 4:35 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poems, Nette :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Scars Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 3:43 AM
Nette! just lovely lady, congrats on your placement :)-luloo
Dietrich Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 1:02 AM
The loveliest one of them all. RIGHT here. Congrats for your win.
Y. Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 10:00 PM
Hi Nette, Congratulations on your fine win:-) Alexis
May Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 9:59 PM
Congrats on your win Nette...
Warrior Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 8:20 AM
Beautifully done nette...a great Pleiades...good luck my friend...god bless...^WW^
Daniel Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 1:00 AM
Lovely write, Nette:) All the best:)
Vaso Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 11:24 PM
I adore her already, just from your prose! :) hugs!
Leiser Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 10:19 PM
Wonderful, creative, fine! Great poem, Nette :)
May Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 3:40 PM
Adored and well adorned ....beautiful write Nette.. best wishes
Lalion Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 1:43 PM
Elegant poem glowing, flowing, amazing!
Deschler Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 1:12 PM
Beautiful! This reminds me of aurora borealis or the Northern Lights, as we call them here in Wisconsin... A lovely poem to read, Nette. Good luck in Kim's contest!
Andresen Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 12:23 PM
- L - for lovely, Nette :) - Best of luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Conte Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 12:12 PM
Incredible!You have portrayed the glory of dawn and light within this brilliant poem using personification too!
Turner Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 7:32 AM
Lovely Nette. I guess where you live you see the aurora australis which should be happening now.
Trifiatis Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 5:34 AM
Adorable dear, nette! Good luck my dear and lots of hugs!
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