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'neath windmill whispers a blushed sun begins its rise rooster standing proud April 26, 2020 Morning Praise Poetry Contest Sponsored by Raul Moreno

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Date: 3/25/2021 6:23:00 PM
charming poem ~
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Date: 5/2/2020 4:17:00 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your win in Joseph contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/1/2020 1:46:00 PM
You brought the picture to life. I loved windmill whispers, but I'm a sucker for alliteration.
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Date: 4/30/2020 9:10:00 PM
---even without cornflakes! Congrats, Sandra! Cheers, gw
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Sandra Adams
Date: 5/1/2020 6:58:00 AM
...lol, thank you Gershon :) hugs
Date: 4/30/2020 9:23:00 AM
I can see a rooster's silhouette beneath a slow moving windmill awaiting to greet mornings light... wonderfully done
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Sandra Adams
Date: 5/1/2020 6:57:00 AM
Thank you so much Robert :) hugs
Date: 4/29/2020 8:15:00 PM
Back with congratulations for a wonderful win, Sandra. I especially love that first line! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Sandra Adams
Date: 5/1/2020 6:57:00 AM
Thank you so much Susan... hugs
Date: 4/29/2020 5:23:00 PM
lovely images, congrats on your win.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 5/1/2020 6:56:00 AM
Thank you so much :)
Date: 4/29/2020 4:47:00 PM
lovely interpretation of the image, many congrats :-) hugs Jan xx
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Sandra Adams
Date: 5/1/2020 6:56:00 AM
Thanks so much Jan :) hugs
Date: 4/27/2020 3:43:00 PM
I can see the rooster clearly. ! Great poem :)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 5/1/2020 6:55:00 AM
Thank you Heidi :) hugs
Date: 4/27/2020 7:11:00 AM
What a wondrous imagery! Great Haiku dearest, Sandra! Hugs xoxo
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Sandra Adams
Date: 5/1/2020 6:55:00 AM
Thank you so much Demetrios :) hugs
Date: 4/27/2020 1:52:00 AM
An interesting take on that picture, Sandra. Unlike others I've read, the emphasis on this one seems to be the windmill rather than the rooster. I do like that expression: "windmill whispers". ... easy to imagine that gentle "whooshing" sound as I read it. Best of luck.
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Date: 5/1/2020 6:55:00 AM
Thank you Timmy...I try and think outside the box when my muse feels like playing along :) hugs
Date: 4/26/2020 9:58:00 PM
Such beautiful imagery, Sandra, a wonderful interpretation of the pic. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
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Sandra Adams
Date: 5/1/2020 6:54:00 AM
Thank you so much Susan :) hugs
Date: 4/26/2020 2:48:00 PM
Wonderful, Sandra!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 4/26/2020 8:45:00 PM
thank you Andrea :)
Date: 4/26/2020 11:34:00 AM
You have to admire the rooster crowing, acting like he owns the world. There is one that wakes my daughter and family at 4 am each morning which is unappreciated. But they do love living in the country. I loved your beautiful haiku Sandra. xxoo
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Date: 4/26/2020 8:45:00 PM
I awake at 4 for work so it wouldn't bother me, but yes they do start rather early don't they? I love the sounds of nature in the country especially... hugs XoXo
Date: 4/26/2020 8:49:00 AM
Love that rooster! ~ Doodle doo
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Sandra Adams
Date: 4/26/2020 8:44:00 PM
lol... thank you so much... hugs
Date: 4/26/2020 8:01:00 AM
Wonderful enough said...
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Sandra Adams
Date: 4/26/2020 8:43:00 PM
Thank you Robert... hugs
Date: 4/26/2020 7:22:00 AM
A blushed sun is a wonderful description of morning rise--all the best, Sandy.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 4/26/2020 8:43:00 PM
Thank you so much Vijay... there is a photo with the contest... a beautiful photo... hugs
Date: 4/26/2020 4:54:00 AM
Love a rooster's cock-a-doodle-do in the morning and especially more so in the surroundings you describe. Well penned dear Sandy and good luck. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 4/26/2020 8:42:00 PM
Thank you so much Jennifer... something about being out in the country and listening to the rooster and the sounds of nature that is soothing... hugs and love :)
Date: 4/26/2020 1:47:00 AM
Love your interpretation of the picture Sandra, the best part of the day. Good luck Stay safe Tom
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Sandra Adams
Date: 4/26/2020 8:41:00 PM
Thank you so much Tom... my muse has been fickle and the current events had me weighted down...I am trying not to surround myself in the news these days and trying to write... at least I have a little concentration back now! hugs