Aurora

'neath windmill whispers
a blushed sun begins its rise
rooster standing proud


April 26, 2020

Morning Praise Poetry Contest
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Line Gauthier

March 25, 2021 at 6:23 PM

charming poem ~

Eve Roper

May 2, 2020 at 4:17 PM

Sandra, congratulations on your win in Joseph contest. Hugs Eve

D.W. Rodgers

May 1, 2020 at 1:46 PM

You brought the picture to life. I loved windmill whispers, but I'm a sucker for alliteration.

Gershon Wolf

April 30, 2020 at 9:10 PM

---even without cornflakes! Congrats, Sandra! Cheers, gw

Sandra Adams

May 1, 2020 at 6:58 AM

...lol, thank you Gershon :) hugs

Running Wolves

April 30, 2020 at 9:23 AM

I can see a rooster's silhouette beneath a slow moving windmill awaiting to greet mornings light... wonderfully done

Sandra Adams

May 1, 2020 at 6:57 AM

Thank you so much Robert :) hugs

Susan Ashley

April 29, 2020 at 8:15 PM

Back with congratulations for a wonderful win, Sandra. I especially love that first line! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Sandra Adams

May 1, 2020 at 6:57 AM

Thank you so much Susan... hugs

D.W. Rodgers

April 29, 2020 at 5:23 PM

lovely images, congrats on your win.

Sandra Adams

May 1, 2020 at 6:56 AM

Thank you so much :)

Jan Allison

April 29, 2020 at 4:47 PM

lovely interpretation of the image, many congrats :-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Adams

May 1, 2020 at 6:56 AM

Thanks so much Jan :) hugs

Heidi Sands

April 27, 2020 at 3:43 PM

I can see the rooster clearly. ! Great poem :)

Sandra Adams

May 1, 2020 at 6:55 AM

Thank you Heidi :) hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis

April 27, 2020 at 7:11 AM

What a wondrous imagery! Great Haiku dearest, Sandra! Hugs xoxo

Sandra Adams

May 1, 2020 at 6:55 AM

Thank you so much Demetrios :) hugs

Timothy Hicks

April 27, 2020 at 1:52 AM

An interesting take on that picture, Sandra. Unlike others I've read, the emphasis on this one seems to be the windmill rather than the rooster. I do like that expression: "windmill whispers". ... easy to imagine that gentle "whooshing" sound as I read it. Best of luck.

Sandra Adams

May 1, 2020 at 6:55 AM

Thank you Timmy...I try and think outside the box when my muse feels like playing along :) hugs

Susan Ashley

April 26, 2020 at 9:58 PM

Such beautiful imagery, Sandra, a wonderful interpretation of the pic. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan

Sandra Adams

May 1, 2020 at 6:54 AM

Thank you so much Susan :) hugs

Andrea Dietrich

April 26, 2020 at 2:48 PM

Wonderful, Sandra!

Sandra Adams

April 26, 2020 at 8:45 PM

thank you Andrea :)

Connie Marcum Wong

April 26, 2020 at 11:34 AM

You have to admire the rooster crowing, acting like he owns the world. There is one that wakes my daughter and family at 4 am each morning which is unappreciated. But they do love living in the country. I loved your beautiful haiku Sandra. xxoo

Sandra Adams

April 26, 2020 at 8:45 PM

I awake at 4 for work so it wouldn't bother me, but yes they do start rather early don't they? I love the sounds of nature in the country especially... hugs XoXo

Gershon Wolf

April 26, 2020 at 8:49 AM

Love that rooster! ~ Doodle doo

Sandra Adams

April 26, 2020 at 8:44 PM

lol... thank you so much... hugs

Running Wolves

April 26, 2020 at 8:01 AM

Wonderful enough said...

Sandra Adams

April 26, 2020 at 8:43 PM

Thank you Robert... hugs

Vijay Pandit

April 26, 2020 at 7:22 AM

A blushed sun is a wonderful description of morning rise--all the best, Sandy.

Sandra Adams

April 26, 2020 at 8:43 PM

Thank you so much Vijay... there is a photo with the contest... a beautiful photo... hugs

Jennifer Proxenos

April 26, 2020 at 4:54 AM

Love a rooster's cock-a-doodle-do in the morning and especially more so in the surroundings you describe. Well penned dear Sandy and good luck. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.

Sandra Adams

April 26, 2020 at 8:42 PM

Thank you so much Jennifer... something about being out in the country and listening to the rooster and the sounds of nature that is soothing... hugs and love :)

Tom Cunningham

April 26, 2020 at 1:47 AM

Love your interpretation of the picture Sandra, the best part of the day. Good luck Stay safe Tom

Sandra Adams

April 26, 2020 at 8:41 PM

Thank you so much Tom... my muse has been fickle and the current events had me weighted down...I am trying not to surround myself in the news these days and trying to write... at least I have a little concentration back now! hugs

Aurora

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