Auntie Dot

Yesterday,as the sun shone down
 strolled to my aunties,she out of her gown
   having a better day,health not too clever
     but was so good see you and chat,however

   

       Not speaking for coming upto nearly three year
         family issues the problem,now i don`t care 
           `cos the effective calmness, and all the love
              you loved the chain from our Shirl who`s above



                 Looking back now,i think to myself why
                   it took so long to solve,`cos money can`t buy
                    back all the time that has so past
                     but will  make it all up,and make it last

 

                        Well Dot i shall wind up your rhyme
                         i know i will see again very soon sometime
                           because on leaving your house,i can confess
                             was a church like feeling,that i`d been blessed.



                                         LOVE YOU.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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July 28, 2011 at 3:40 PM
Wonderful creative writing today Paul. I will be back soon to read more if the gremlins in PoetrySoup will permit. Love, Carol
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