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Auntie Dot

Yesterday,as the sun shone down strolled to my aunties,she out of her gown having a better day,health not too clever but was so good see you and chat,however Not speaking for coming upto nearly three year family issues the problem,now i don`t care `cos the effective calmness, and all the love you loved the chain from our Shirl who`s above Looking back now,i think to myself why it took so long to solve,`cos money can`t buy back all the time that has so past but will make it all up,and make it last Well Dot i shall wind up your rhyme i know i will see again very soon sometime because on leaving your house,i can confess was a church like feeling,that i`d been blessed. LOVE YOU.

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Date: 7/28/2011 3:40:00 PM
Wonderful creative writing today Paul. I will be back soon to read more if the gremlins in PoetrySoup will permit. Love, Carol
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