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August's Aura

Alluring atmosphere announced Adeleke Adeite’s arrival Under God’s unfailing, unadulterated, ultimate umbrella; Given golden grains, grace, glee, glory and glow… gifted. Understanding, unbelievably unashamed…unbeatable, Sold to sincerity, soaked in sympathy, sings sweet songs, Tested with thorns and thistles, trusted with terrific talents.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/9/2010 4:47:00 PM

what does August represent for you, Adeleke? Where did you arrive in that month and are you talking about another August or right now? VEry alliterative!! Luv, Andrea

Kristi Hayner

Date: 8/9/2010 4:34:00 AM

Very nice, love the word play. Thank you for your positive comment on my work. I imagine they randomly pick ones to feature but it is still fun! Happy day to you! Kristi Lu

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/5/2010 9:24:00 PM

Alliteration glitters in your charming poem Adeleke. Thank you for your kind comments on my poem I Walk on Water. Aloha, Connie P.S. I happen to be an Aura Photographer

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/5/2010 7:57:00 PM

Soon it will be your birthday and wishing u a happy day on the 29th as I will be away then.. so let me be the first to express happy celebration to u Adeleke.. I luv your new contest and hope u will enjoy my entry... u definitely have a pleasing aura my friend.. enjoyed with luv..