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August Trance

Watching the clouds at dusk and the deer in flight. . . I wait for these beauties to cross. The hue of the sky morphs from ebony ~ scores navy blue; headrests of angels tucked away. Camry headlights illuminate the warm-green of oak and moss; unsettled as the shadows shift. The floodlights hover over the blue mountain poly-tarp with potential nightlife. Exciting the thrill of heightened landscape — friends of the sun, strangers at midnight. Diversely the ho hum of security, under the lamplight. . . in front of the smart t.v.
nevertheless
August trance of romance the images framed — God of fame, gifted them. 8/7/2019

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Date: 8/15/2019 5:49:00 PM
Cheers, Kim, another masterpiece. Panagiota
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/15/2019 9:12:00 PM
Thank you for saying so <3 Kim
Date: 8/10/2019 6:12:00 PM
Your imagery is beautifully beautiful, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/10/2019 6:15:00 PM
Thanks so much and for all the reads! I’ll be a bit limited for the next two weeks. My grandsons staying with us!
Date: 8/8/2019 1:48:00 PM
Nothing like that startling feeling the moment you first see the deer, especially if (you are) caught unawares. Lovely penned, Kim. Wondrous. ~ gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/8/2019 2:19:00 PM
Was all that! Thanks, Gershon!
Date: 8/7/2019 11:15:00 PM
I was breathless while reading this beauty Kim. I love it and am putting it into my Faves! ; ) xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/8/2019 6:33:00 AM
Thank you so much, Connie! xxoo
Date: 8/7/2019 4:26:00 PM
such exquisite imagery Kim:-) hugs jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/7/2019 5:13:00 PM
Thank you, Jan!

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