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August Tease

All week, three-digit temperatures have clung to afternoons which thirsted for relief. I woke today; a dab of dampness hung in morning's atmosphere, and like a thief, it's waited out the day until the sun dipped out of view, and now the sky's turned grey and blowing of a whipping wind's begun! I go outside and watch the tree limbs sway. Some droplets touch my skin, and I suppose it soon will rain. The breeze refreshes me. I go back in my house and I compose this poem, but looking out again, I see the sun peek through the clouds as if to mock. In hot still air, two birds fly past and squawk! Aug. 7, 2020 For Brenda Chiri's Nature Rhyming Poetry Contest

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Date: 8/20/2020 8:42:00 PM
Fantastic imagery, Andrea. It's been the same here. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 8/20/2020 9:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Oh, August, hot and dry. I cannot wait for fall and the cool air. You nailed it. Enjoy your win and day...........
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Date: 8/19/2020 10:43:00 PM
Yikes! Gee wilikers, and here midst ocean breeze sprays that closely links us to body wetness, that clings our clothes to us by teasing tradewinds -- really meant to say a big Congrats, Andrea, Aloha! William
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Date: 8/19/2020 10:22:00 PM
Another awesome win with your excellent sonnet talents! Congrats ~ John
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Date: 8/8/2020 9:07:00 PM
This is clever and fun; I feel I was with you looking at those birds.
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Date: 8/8/2020 8:12:00 PM
Thank God for Air conditioners Andrea. luv Michael...
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Date: 8/8/2020 1:30:00 PM
"t'aint the heat....it's the humidity" or so they say. When I was in Texas they would say "it's 105 degrees but it's a dry heat" to which I would reply "tell that to the next chicken you put in the oven"
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Date: 8/8/2020 1:45:00 PM
ha! When I first came to Utah, I felt like I was inside an oven. Now I have grown very accustomed to it. Iowa's humidity would have been better for my skin, but I actually prefer dry heat to humidity now.
Date: 8/8/2020 8:33:00 AM
"for afternoons that thirsted for relief" this is a lovely poem from beginning to end..wonderful imagery and rhyme..
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Date: 8/8/2020 8:32:00 AM
Splendid write, Andrea and for sure a top winner in the contest. That's about the way it goes here in Colorado Springs. Storms build up over Pikes Peak, the rain skips over us and lands in Kansas!!! Bob
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Date: 8/8/2020 6:01:00 AM
You described it beautifully Andrea--the hide and seek sun plays.. amid sights and sounds of August.
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Date: 8/7/2020 9:30:00 PM
Very sweet slice of life in the form of a rhyming poem. Your nature sounds surprisingly like my nature, many states apart!
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