August Tease

All week, three-digit temperatures have clung
to afternoons which thirsted for relief.
I woke today; a dab of dampness hung
in morning's atmosphere, and like a thief,
it's waited out the day until the sun
dipped out of view, and now the sky's turned grey
and blowing of a whipping wind's begun!
I go outside and watch the tree limbs sway.
Some droplets touch my skin, and I suppose
it soon will rain. The breeze refreshes me.
I go back in my house and I compose
this poem, but looking out again, I see
the sun peek through the clouds as if to mock.
In hot still air, two birds fly past and squawk!

Aug. 7, 2020
For Brenda Chiri's Nature Rhyming Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Roper Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 8:42 PM
Fantastic imagery, Andrea. It's been the same here. Congratulations on your win.
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August 20, 2020 at 9:26 AM
Congratulations on your win. Oh, August, hot and dry. I cannot wait for fall and the cool air. You nailed it. Enjoy your win and day...........
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August 19, 2020 at 10:43 PM
Yikes! Gee wilikers, and here midst ocean breeze sprays that closely links us to body wetness, that clings our clothes to us by teasing tradewinds -- really meant to say a big Congrats, Andrea, Aloha! William
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August 19, 2020 at 10:22 PM
Another awesome win with your excellent sonnet talents! Congrats ~ John
Krutsinger Avatar
August 8, 2020 at 9:07 PM
This is clever and fun; I feel I was with you looking at those birds.
Tor Avatar
August 8, 2020 at 8:12 PM
Thank God for Air conditioners Andrea. luv Michael...
Lawless Avatar
August 8, 2020 at 1:30 PM
"t'aint the heat....it's the humidity" or so they say. When I was in Texas they would say "it's 105 degrees but it's a dry heat" to which I would reply "tell that to the next chicken you put in the oven"
Dietrich Avatar
August 8, 2020 at 1:45 PM
ha! When I first came to Utah, I felt like I was inside an oven. Now I have grown very accustomed to it. Iowa's humidity would have been better for my skin, but I actually prefer dry heat to humidity now.
Kaufman Avatar
August 8, 2020 at 8:33 AM
"for afternoons that thirsted for relief" this is a lovely poem from beginning to end..wonderful imagery and rhyme..
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August 8, 2020 at 8:32 AM
Splendid write, Andrea and for sure a top winner in the contest. That's about the way it goes here in Colorado Springs. Storms build up over Pikes Peak, the rain skips over us and lands in Kansas!!! Bob
Pandit Avatar
August 8, 2020 at 6:01 AM
You described it beautifully Andrea--the hide and seek sun plays.. amid sights and sounds of August.
Krutsinger Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 9:30 PM
Very sweet slice of life in the form of a rhyming poem. Your nature sounds surprisingly like my nature, many states apart!
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