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August Midnight

The ceiling fan swirls clockwise with the heat, sings to me of distant sleep.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/16/2009 2:25:00 PM
very cool ;) Light & Love
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Date: 7/18/2009 2:40:00 PM
Nice use of imagery for a creative view. Enjoyed it. Have a good weekend. Karen
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Date: 7/17/2009 5:18:00 PM
I love this Haiku. Sounds like some of the times in my life when there wasn't even a fan. And some nights there wasn't any sleep. There was just heat and we prayed for the rain to bring the refreshing cool. Sara
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