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August

August brightness shows 
Unique memories to catch,
Golden sandcastles built
Under the holidays euphoria.
Sweet when starts, sour when it ends~
Torch flame reaching its top splendor.
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Nuwas Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 12:52 AM
Beautiful!
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 7:23 AM
Thank you so much Aysha, for reading and leaving your kind comment. Have a lovely day.!
Buhagiar Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 8:27 AM
Summer can be full of splendour. Not in Malta though. It's too darn hot.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 2:07 PM
Summer is always nice when you have rainy or harsh winters. Spain has different climate, but day by day we are hotter and hotter too. Here, that I ve said before, we face the Atlantic Ocean, the northern west part, not the hottest, but now the problem is that the weather changes so quick from cold to hot, or viceverse, that bodies don't have the chance to adapt. We go from 25 degrees to 35 in one day. We are really suffering. I'm waiting for winter, at least if you feel cold you can put clothes on. Oh God, I can understand you what you are suffering there, I make an idea. Sorry for that, keep safer as possible my dear friend. Good night to you.
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