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This is a Collum Lune haiku ~

august

slept on dunes
midmorning waking to seagulls' cries
lifeguard's oceanic kisses
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Wolf Avatar
July 8, 2024 at 7:52 PM
By the authority that no one would ever invest in me, I hereby crown you 'Haiku-Maestra!' Each of your haikus seems better than the last one, Regina. I especially like 'lifeguard's oceanic kisses' and 'waking to seagulls' cries.' Such vivid imagery. Bravo! :) Gershon
Elliott Avatar
July 9, 2024 at 2:48 AM
My deepest gratitude, good poetry friend. Your kind words mean so much to me. I hope your week has started off splendid and with much writing creativity. Shalom :)
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