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This is a Collum Lune haiku ~

slept on dunes midmorning waking to seagulls' cries lifeguard's oceanic kisses

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Tom Woody

Date: 7/9/2024 5:56:00 AM

Ooh I'd love to sleep on a sand dune underneath the stars. Awesome haiku

Regina Elliott
Date: 7/9/2024 6:05:00 AM

Thank you so much, Tom, for stopping by and reading my nostalgic summer haiku on the joys of youth. I hope you have an inspirational July day. All the best to you. :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/8/2024 7:52:00 PM

By the authority that no one would ever invest in me, I hereby crown you 'Haiku-Maestra!' Each of your haikus seems better than the last one, Regina. I especially like 'lifeguard's oceanic kisses' and 'waking to seagulls' cries.' Such vivid imagery. Bravo! :) Gershon

Regina Elliott
Date: 7/9/2024 2:48:00 AM

My deepest gratitude, good poetry friend. Your kind words mean so much to me. I hope your week has started off splendid and with much writing creativity. Shalom :)