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i fought the time away knowing it's not like it was i am broken by what you would say you should know it always does i almost had you here i waited time and time again you're now something i fear you're my greatest sin i fell apart because of you you destroyed whats inside i hate it's the only thing i have to do your feelings have shyed im saying goodbye one more time there's no turning back now so this is your farwell rhyme im sorry i never knew how

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Date: 12/8/2009 8:43:00 AM
Rebecca Lynn, Tell me, please, do you speak French? (soup mail) Smiles and joy to you. Dane Ann
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Date: 11/28/2009 12:19:00 PM
This poem is wonderful, Becca. Relationships are very difficult sometimes. And letting go is never easy. Your poem is so well written. It feels somehow lonely. Very good writing here. (Did I tell you, before that I have a daughter named Rebecca Lynn spelled exactly the same way. If this is my Becca, I love you LOTS.) Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 11/22/2009 12:17:00 PM
Hey Rebecca, you have something really good here and I believe it's about abuse? If it is I hope you're serious about 'sayng goodbye'! -you maybe did this in a hurry but you can always edit it. It could be very very good! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 11/20/2009 5:19:00 PM
Honestly, it needs a little re-writing but I think you've chosen a good subject for a rant and this is definitely a rant.
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