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Au Naturel

Wood, naked to sky Its pale shaft rising...breath caught she takes it all in. Written for "Natural/Nature Sexy Haiku" contest November 9, 2012 by "Rebel Sun"

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Date: 11/9/2012 11:23:00 AM
I am not a pro on any form of poetry but...I know when I read a poem if I have enjoyed it. Now I have read yours and I have indeed enjoyed it Daniel. I wish you a wonderful weekend and hope you find much inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/9/2012 7:50:00 AM
Love the double entendre! An excellent write for the sextera contest.
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Date: 11/9/2012 4:57:00 AM
A very well written haiku poem, Daniel. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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