Attraction

On fertile soil I sow my seeds, willing them to grow…   
Every day I tend to them you see, guiding their fruits to show…   
With all the love I give to thee the harvest should not be slow…   
Should I send out concern or worry, its manifest will go…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Susan Avatar
April 5, 2011 at 9:14 AM
I think all of the lines have a nice flow to them. However, I'm not sure what you mean in the last line and I don't know how the title fits in. So assume I'm an idiot or clarify.
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