Attire

It wasn't that simple to love her It asked to wear attire Fashioned with her sorrow I always felt naked

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Thomas Carney

Date: 10/16/2017 4:24:00 PM

Came back to this one last time. This is so thought provoking. I marvel at Line 2 and the use of "It." Who is "It?" Must be same as "She." Or it could be 'the situation' the protagonist is in. Some times I over analyze poems...ha ha Still, very good poem. Love it. Thomas

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/17/2016 12:38:00 AM

asma memon, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 2/9/2016 7:07:00 AM

A whole story told in four lines!!! I love the plot and emotional atmosphere in every line.... Congrats Asma, for having this poem featured in the poetry soup homepage!!!! ;-)

Susan Gentry

Date: 1/29/2016 1:03:00 AM

Thought-provoking poem. Excellent!

Asma Memon
Date: 1/29/2016 6:51:00 AM

Thankyou Susan.

Thomas Carney

Date: 1/26/2016 4:11:00 PM

If I wrote something like this it would be at least several stanza's. I've read this many times now and keep turning the pages. I admire a poet that can say so much with so little. Very good work. Thomas

Asma Memon
Date: 1/29/2016 6:52:00 AM

Yes definitely, You have a different style and which is really good. Thanks

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/24/2016 2:17:00 PM

- Great written, Asma - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Asma Memon
Date: 1/24/2016 2:19:00 PM

Thankyou so much Anne. If you use instagram do follow me. @lifeisinyou