Attire

It wasn't that simple to love her
It asked to wear attire
Fashioned with her sorrow
I always felt naked

beautydeepdesireloveenclosed rhyme

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Beata Agustin

December 8, 2024 at 11:06 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Thomas Carney

October 16, 2017 at 4:24 PM

Came back to this one last time. This is so thought provoking. I marvel at Line 2 and the use of "It." Who is "It?" Must be same as "She." Or it could be 'the situation' the protagonist is in. Some times I over analyze poems...ha ha Still, very good poem. Love it. Thomas

Poet Destroyer A

March 17, 2016 at 12:38 AM

asma memon, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA

Teddy Kimathi

February 9, 2016 at 7:07 AM

A whole story told in four lines!!! I love the plot and emotional atmosphere in every line.... Congrats Asma, for having this poem featured in the poetry soup homepage!!!! ;-)

Susan Gentry

January 29, 2016 at 1:03 AM

Thought-provoking poem. Excellent!

Asma Memon

January 29, 2016 at 6:51 AM

Thankyou Susan.

Thomas Carney

January 26, 2016 at 4:11 PM

If I wrote something like this it would be at least several stanza's. I've read this many times now and keep turning the pages. I admire a poet that can say so much with so little. Very good work. Thomas

Asma Memon

January 29, 2016 at 6:52 AM

Yes definitely, You have a different style and which is really good. Thanks