Attic

rabies ridden bats
batting about my belfry
blind inspiration

writingsenryu

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Andrea Dietrich

November 30, 2013 at 9:57 PM

Love that alliteration, tim. Congrats for your win.

Dr.Ram Mehta

November 29, 2013 at 5:32 AM

Congrats on the win, Tim

Laura Breidenthal

July 26, 2013 at 5:29 PM

Excellent play on words. I really enjoyed reading. Also, thanks for your review on my work-i appreciate it. Always, Laura

Charmaine Chircop

July 25, 2013 at 10:08 AM

So blind is the bat.. Blind inspiration leads to the most excitimg worlds and forbidden places..Interestimg senryu..By the way tnks for your lovely comment and your footle.You put a smile on my face..Cherry syrup and caramel are my favs.Re my surname i get all kind of interpretations..hehe : )

Andrea Dietrich

July 24, 2013 at 3:32 PM

how cool. Blind inspiration. I love how you made that connection, Tim.

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 24, 2013 at 11:35 AM

- Where did the idea come from .... well done! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

July 23, 2013 at 8:41 PM

Hello Tim, blind as a bat, thoughts are going through my mind...... LOL. i don't know... I got to say... stay out of the attic. a great senryu. love..LINDA