Attentively

Allow what is complex to unravel 
it may repair what was left crumpled;
Imagine the power of romantic ideas;

Just one kiss could instigate ideas;
Pain dissipates and will deftly unravel
giving flight to hope that crumpled;

A cautious repair to what was crumpled 
be patient listen to those shy ideas;
Allow a sensitive soul to slowly unravel;

Attentively unravel those crumpled ideas.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rolland Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 5:42 PM
a beautiful penning, we have to fly away some ideas, so touching, thanks
Udaeta Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 5:58 AM
Thank you!
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