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Attention Is What She Craves

She just wants to be noticed Attention is what she craves No one feels her pain No one sees her scars A disappointment and an empty heart She thinks no better of herself So what does she do? She takes that blade She slits her wrists She cuts, she cuts, she cuts “Why do you do this to me?” The blood drips as she cries She goes to school People laugh, people stare Why does nobody see it? Why does nobody care? She sits on a bench, bullied and scared She doesn’t know what to do now What will make them see? What will make them care? She just wants to be noticed Attention is what she craves No one feels her pain No one sees her scars A disappointment and an empty heart She thinks no better of herself So what does she do? She takes that gun She pulls that trigger “Oh, they’ll notice now” The blood pools, she no longer needs to cry “Why do you do this to me?” She just wants to be noticed Attention is what she craves

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Date: 11/30/2016 6:05:00 PM
Dark but beautiful...Still no one should ever feel those emotions..Great read..
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Tatianna Leachet
Date: 11/30/2016 7:10:00 PM
Yes, thank you
Date: 11/29/2016 7:09:00 AM
Deeply touching poem Tat, I feel your pain; just know your time will come. Focus on the good in your life; you are a talented wordsmith, use that as your armor.
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Tatianna Leachet
Date: 11/29/2016 7:24:00 AM
Thank you so much, yes, poetry is my coping method. It makes me happy :)
Date: 11/29/2016 6:09:00 AM
Very deep Tatianna, Every word speaks truth, well written piece. Best Wishes Kevin
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Tatianna Leachet
Date: 11/29/2016 6:10:00 AM
Thank you, I appreciate it :)
Date: 11/29/2016 5:53:00 AM
Hi Tatianna. Ouch, but straightforward truth, there, and it seems there's more of such things in our modern world, or at least we hear about it more now.
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Tatianna Leachet
Date: 11/29/2016 5:58:00 AM
Yes, I like to write about the real world and only sugar coat if needed to. Things like this happen so often, and being a high school student, I am exposed to the mass of it. I use myself as inspiration for most of my work, my life, my stories, my pains.

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