Attempting to Outguess my Puppies

attempting to outguess my puppies I run outside
up the hill, next to the fort and the huge water slide
I refill their water bowls, which total up to seven
Thinking they will remember their doggy park heaven

Lethargic, they both lie in the mud glaring at me
under the tutelage of the honey thistle tree
I sit in the sun thinking this idea was a dud
We go back inside where they bring all that annoying mud
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Alex Avatar
September 14, 2025 at 1:15 AM
A grand scenic depiction. It's alive.
Krutsinger Avatar
September 17, 2025 at 4:11 AM
thank you Christuraj
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