Attempting

attempting to make
model aeroplanes - -
super glued fingers

modern haiku
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
December 14, 2011 at 6:21 AM
Thank you so much for your kind comments on my writing Jack. I wish you continued inspiration that you may always write and share your poetry with us. Love, Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 10, 2011 at 6:01 AM
Congratulations on your win. x
Song Avatar
December 9, 2011 at 5:27 AM
My new comment trend on the Soup is to consistently agree with Andrea!..... Again, I AGREE...This one was to my heart's delight.... My darling spouse really enjoys building WW2 airplane models...and u are dead right...what a mess!! Wish this were top top of the winners. Loved it. Blessings. Gwendolen
Dietrich Avatar
December 8, 2011 at 11:39 PM
dang, this one I had hoped to see in top ten. It was awesome, Jack. Congrats on being in the winners' circle. Luv, Andrea
Poet Avatar
December 8, 2011 at 11:25 PM
love it Jack!Congrats on your win in the contest of Cyndi.
Merryman Avatar
December 8, 2011 at 4:37 PM
I can certainly picture this = super glue is so tricky! Congrats on your HM, Jack. Kim
Guzzi Avatar
December 8, 2011 at 4:07 PM
ahhhh yes!!! and yes you have written a haiku [shame on you! :P] Congrad's Light & Love Always
K. Avatar
December 8, 2011 at 1:26 PM
Hahaha! Oh gosh why did I suddenly burst out laughing here? Hehe, I could just imagine this happening! I have had my bouts with super glue. haha, always a fun experience... ;) Congrats on all your wins, Jack!
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December 8, 2011 at 12:59 PM
LOL Jack! That is why I will never try. I'm sure it would end in a trip to the ER :) Congrats. on you HM.
Williams Avatar
December 8, 2011 at 12:30 PM
Jack congrats on your win..David
Brown Avatar
December 8, 2011 at 11:11 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Cyndi's "Creativity" contest Jack. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 10:10 PM
THIS is really good, Jack. I hope it scores high. Call you sticky fingers!
Song Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 9:11 PM
What a sticky mess you have constructed, Jack!! lol. I am completely entertained by your clever wit, friend. Just awesome. Good luck....find a new hobby. lol. Gwendolen
Sivey Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 1:08 PM
I can't do those models, I honestly do get that glue all over me and my fingers! I don't have the patience to do those...I'm always in awe when I see a model finished, I'm quite impressed by this! It sounds like you might have done several before!! Great Work!!
Lane Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 12:56 PM
I've done that more than once. Tony
Seraphin Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 11:48 AM
* "HAHAHAHA * I DO THAT SOMETIMES WITH MY VERY WORDS * MY DEAR SWEET PRECIOUS JACK * MY TONGUE GETS STUCK TO THE TOP MY LIPS *.* VERY SWEET * HAPPY HOLIDAYS TO YOU * MY LUV ALWAYS * SARAH." *
Austin Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 11:28 AM
YES! I had a second childhood, sent to Cleveland for plans and built half a dozen huge biplanes from WW I. They hang from my bedroom ceiling and gather dust. I gave up on super glue for the very reason you've written about. Boy did all that dope mess up my lungs! Poetry is much more healthy. Great write, Jack. Love, daver
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