Attain

As the yellow sun climbs in the sky
Reaching heights unattained by I 
Inspiring to attain  
A better person before I die
Let the worse character traits fly
Let good in me remain

Rime Couee'  sort of

introspectionrhyme

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James Peranteau

August 28, 2015 at 8:59 AM

Sort of ???... Your message is loud and clear dear poet ! This is one of the reasons your's truly has spent the years developing the poet who once was burried deep within this pneuma...sharing is to some the simple ink of poetry, yet for myself, it is the integral...you display this quality throught your writes...the reason I come to you ! Have a brilliant weekend Sara....much love, james