Atonement Vows

Mine father hast scorned thee, thus he locked thee in a tower. Didst thou truly believe the same of me? Hast thou no faith in true love’s power, whilst mine adoration continues to flower? I shalt come for thee on a midsummer’s night, scaling thy tower without fear of fall. Ye will find mine heart contrite, standing before thee in a confining wall, I shalt give thee a symbol that thy doubt will forestall. With this letter is a ring from the queen’s jewelry chest; keepest it hidden ‘til the evil force hast been overthrown. In a fortnight mine own army will ensure the king hast been laid to rest and ‘tis I who shalt assume the throne. Whilst ye wait, prithee allowest me to atone. ‘Neath the halo of the next full moon, I shalt travel to thee. Peer out thy window; Thou will findeth me crooning love’s tune. Unashamed, fearless, I shalt put on a show, vowing to save thee from thy most wretched foe.
*For Michael Smith’s Early Modern English Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kendrick Avatar
February 9, 2013 at 7:32 AM
Congrats on your win..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
February 8, 2013 at 5:17 PM
wow, it's an awesome tale, and reminds me of Shakespeare type story! Congrats, CArolyn.
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February 8, 2013 at 9:08 AM
Exquisite poetry in your unmistakable style, Carolyn...congratulations and once again I must say I'm SO glad to see you back! - Tim
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February 7, 2013 at 10:11 AM
Congrats on your HM xx
Burch Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 8:46 PM
Well done Carolyn!!! Big Congratulations on this fabulous work of art!!! Big hugs love you bunches deb
Haick Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 8:36 PM
Wow! Wow! and Wow!! Not only is this so well written, Seafaress, it's another Masterpiece! Congratulations on your very fine win. Love, Annalise
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March 3, 2012 at 3:32 PM
This is outstanding poetry Carolyn my dear poet friend. Never disappointing. I used Xlibris for my second book. And thank you for the sweet comments. Love Michael
Ball Avatar
March 3, 2012 at 9:08 AM
Hi. Your my friend and this poem is off the charts you should do well in the contest. Hopefully your health is beteer than mine but that is for the Father to say it's in His will. god bless Robert
Nair Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 2:40 PM
I wouldn't be able to write this stuff, envy u..a fine piece looking like from a past master , luv, jag
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