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Atonement

ATONEMENT I APPRECIATE THE LOVE YOU GIVE ALTHOUGH I AM OFTEN UNDESERVING YOU STAND BY MY SIDE AT WILL MY LOVE, I AM RESERVING KNOW THAT I HAVE CONTRITION ALTHOUGH IT MAY APPEAR LAME YOUR LOVE IS OVERLY SUFFICIENT WHICH IS WHY I CARRY YOUR NAME IN SPITE OF MY POOR ATTITUDE I LOVE YOU MORE THAN YOU KNOW BUT I HAVE ISSUES TO WORK OUT WHICH CAN ALTER MY LOVE FLOW MY BEHAVIOR IS NOT YOUR FAULT THOUGH YOU MAY OFTEN THINK SO WHILE I WORK OUT MY PROBLEMS MY LOVE FOR YOU STILL GROWS SO BE PATIENT WITH ME, LOVE TOGETHER OUR YEARS ARE LONG IF I HAVE TREATED YOU UNKINDLY FOR THIS I WILL ATONE LINDA PICKRON 7-19-13

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Skat A

Date: 2/22/2014 7:52:00 PM

Hi Linda, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Linda Pickron
Date: 2/22/2014 9:24:00 PM

Thanks so much!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2014 6:13:00 PM

Linda, heart felt write, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join the soup March 2010. You will find many friendly poets, who ready to take you under the their wings, and support and offer any kind of feedback. I will be around to help you grow with the community, if you like. I look forward to meeting and reading any poems or smiles you offer. :) :) :) We are one big happy family. (Drama & Love) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Linda Pickron
Date: 2/21/2014 7:00:00 PM

thank u!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/21/2014 4:47:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Linda- I choose your first lovely written poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Linda Pickron
Date: 2/21/2014 7:01:00 PM

Thanks, Anne!