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Atonement

Atonement of those words that left from your mouth, Which broke my heart beyond any bound. Those gut-wrenching actions that I have seen from your eyes, Are more painful than your lies. That love you claimed was never mine, For you, I have always been a rotten wine, Sour and sharp, not so divine. The moment that we had feels like a sham now, Your presence now is my broken vow. The gate has been closed, there is no way to trespass, The love that I had is devastated, perhaps.

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Date: 10/14/2022 8:17:00 PM
A most compelling poem which catches love's expectations but notes how they are broken. Your final line rings with ambiguity to leave your reader pondering outcomes. A fine write! Brian
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Shraddha Tripathi
Date: 10/16/2022 8:38:00 AM
Thank you so much Brian!!! I really appreciate your words.
Date: 10/13/2022 12:16:00 AM
left love comes back but never comes back with the first feelings !
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Shraddha Tripathi
Date: 10/16/2022 8:44:00 AM
Yes, very well said!
Date: 10/9/2022 10:08:00 AM
?? a difficult remembrance of pain very well penned kindest regards!
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Shraddha Tripathi
Date: 10/16/2022 8:45:00 AM
Thank you so much Anonomus!!!!

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