Atomic Blanket

In neon skys you encompass me,
a gift of emotion and serenity.
You shine of today's promise,
I fear tommorow's dimming.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 5:58 PM
You speak like a true seasoned poet to these ears... in four short lines you encompass both love and potential loss. Well done again! Keith
Linney Avatar
December 18, 2015 at 1:54 PM
Thank you Keith, I did expand on this in another poem, but I do prefer this more succinct version, thank you once again for your very kind words.
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