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Atomic Blanket

In neon skys you encompass me, a gift of emotion and serenity. You shine of today's promise, I fear tommorow's dimming.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/17/2015 5:58:00 PM
You speak like a true seasoned poet to these ears... in four short lines you encompass both love and potential loss. Well done again! Keith
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Gary Gene Linney
Date: 12/18/2015 1:54:00 PM
Thank you Keith, I did expand on this in another poem, but I do prefer this more succinct version, thank you once again for your very kind words.

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