Atmospheric Pressure

Planet Earth gives so much pleasure 
when weather becomes much fresher,

our sun doth shine, relieves our pain,
provides precious life giving rain,

wet cold spells could spoil our leisure 
rain, fog and frost our transgressor,

high or low the truth must remain
Mother Nature has Earth to maintain,

correct weather forecasts we all treasure 
results from Earths atmospheric pressure,

inclement or comfortable we complain 
we always have the weather to blame.

Composed 29th August 2017,
Atmospheric pressure contest,
Sponsored by Shadow Hamilton.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Pandit Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 8:13 AM
A lovely couplet Roy--a well deserved win--Congrats!
Pett Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 8:25 AM
Thank you very much for your very kind comment Vijay much appreciated. :))
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 11:27 PM
Congratulations on your win, Roy.
Pett Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 4:45 AM
Thank you very much for your very kind comment Subimal much appreciated. :))
Harris Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 7:16 PM
This was a difficult subject to write about. Congratulations on your contest placement, Roy!
Pett Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 4:48 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment Anita, nice surprise to get a placement in this interesting contest. :))
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