Atmospheres
ATMOSPHERES
capturing light
striving for
impressions
of
painted
views
repeatedly
refining
reflecting
appears
seen
from
a distance
tilted
intertwined
enraptured
&
cast adrift
vulnerable
stripped bare
close to
the
precipice
cocooned
in a
continuous ebb
& flow
'til
perfect stillness
descends
NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.
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