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Atlantis Per Carolyn

Atlantis per Carolyn Carolyn, So when the greatest of the mammoths drowned, the waters rose over the old home town, and Noah's Ark it wallowed forth, a sea of mud Atlantic ocean brought, Great Tuaoi stone went under, Devils triangle, still works it's wonders, perhaps for really naught? the Alantean Gesunder... should be sought, thereunder, ought. Don Johnson Brian Strand Contest Name SEPTEMBER-YOUR CHOICE any theme/form max 14 lines

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Date: 8/27/2011 9:04:00 PM
Great work of art here Don! I sure would have loved to have seen Atlantis in its prime, wouldn't you have? I enjoyed your poem that piqued my interest about Atlantis!
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Don Johnson
Date: 8/28/2011 12:36:00 AM
If life is not a total waste of time, perhaps we had a different line, back and forth a hundred thousand years, with blood n death impaled by spears, duty caused the crime, if it's not a waste of time? resurrection, sometimes, cheers:)

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