Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

At Your Leisure

Laying within 
warm arms
Gazing into your 
green eyes
Inexplicable 
your charms
You make my 
love arise

The warmth you 
always give
Leaves me alive
deep inside
No other way I 
could ever live
You give me so 
much pride

Never take your
love away
I will never take
mine either
Can't live without 
you I say
Take me at your 
leisure

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

John Fleming June 23, 2019 at 2:14 PM Well, well, there is much to go at...you have been very industrious of late :) I agree with Tom, Brenda, you would indeed make an excellent romantic novel writer. Nice, soothing little poem -- enjoyed! Lots of affection. :) john Brenda Chiri June 24, 2019 at 9:57 PM Ahh my dear John! I so can't wait for your feedback! You and Tom well I guess it's so then! Shall I start the first chapter then? Haha! Short poems is about my speed so I will continue as so but with the upbeat mood! Thank you John!;) All my affection B

Barbara Barry-Nishanian June 12, 2019 at 4:44 PM Enjoyed very much! Brenda Chiri June 13, 2019 at 2:15 AM Thank you Barbara I'm glad you did! I do hate vulgar poem...so I try to keep mine as so! It a pleasure to have you stop by!;)

Nick Trim June 5, 2019 at 9:53 AM a bit horn isn't it, lol I submit a well done to your submissive poem, enjoyed that one Brenda Chiri June 7, 2019 at 12:54 PM Lmao! You are too much Nick! Well who is being submissive too? Lmao! Wait isn't there suppose to be a dominant person everyone can't be submissive! Wow this is probably why we are all alone nick! Lmao! We can't seem to get the whole process right lmao!;)

Gordon Mcconnell June 1, 2019 at 3:44 PM Super romantic write Brenda, Tom's right you should write a novel and we all would subscribe to it! Have a great day, Gordon Brenda Chiri June 1, 2019 at 6:09 PM Thank you Gordon lol I may have to look into that!,)

Heidi Sands May 31, 2019 at 8:15 AM Very nice Brenda :) Brenda Chiri May 31, 2019 at 8:33 AM Thank you Heidi!;)

Tom Cunningham May 30, 2019 at 1:09 PM You should write a romantic novel Brenda, you write these so well. Tom Brenda Chiri May 30, 2019 at 1:47 PM Lol Tom thank you so very much!;)