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At Your Leisure

Laying within warm arms Gazing into your green eyes Inexplicable your charms You make my love arise The warmth you always give Leaves me alive deep inside No other way I could ever live You give me so much pride Never take your love away I will never take mine either Can't live without you I say Take me at your leisure

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John Fleming

Date: 6/23/2019 2:14:00 PM

Well, well, there is much to go at...you have been very industrious of late :) I agree with Tom, Brenda, you would indeed make an excellent romantic novel writer. Nice, soothing little poem -- enjoyed! Lots of affection. :) john

Brenda Chiri
Date: 6/24/2019 9:57:00 PM

Ahh my dear John! I so can't wait for your feedback! You and Tom well I guess it's so then! Shall I start the first chapter then? Haha! Short poems is about my speed so I will continue as so but with the upbeat mood! Thank you John!;) All my affection B

Barbara Barry-Nishanian

Date: 6/12/2019 4:44:00 PM

Enjoyed very much!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 6/13/2019 2:15:00 AM

Thank you Barbara I'm glad you did! I do hate vulgar poem...so I try to keep mine as so! It a pleasure to have you stop by!;)

Nick Trim

Date: 6/5/2019 9:53:00 AM

a bit horn isn't it, lol I submit a well done to your submissive poem, enjoyed that one

Brenda Chiri
Date: 6/7/2019 12:54:00 PM

Lmao! You are too much Nick! Well who is being submissive too? Lmao! Wait isn't there suppose to be a dominant person everyone can't be submissive! Wow this is probably why we are all alone nick! Lmao! We can't seem to get the whole process right lmao!;)