Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

At Your Command

My soul has an undying thirst
Needing a refreshing touch
In an emotional storm burst
Silent whispers promise much

Essence high on motivation
Hearing your loving sounds
Giving into a sexy creation
With love forever abound

Dark shadows can't conceal
A being full of vibrant colors
Moving me once again to feel
Tempting me more than others

Take me and raise me higher
With your warm gentle hands
Bring on the purest of desire
To vibrate at your command


2nd place
Contest:Strand select 4 any form any theme
Sponsor:Brian Strand
Date: 12/28/2019

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Vijay Pandit January 6, 2020 at 2:13 PM Lovely, as always, Brenda--congrats on you TOP win. Brenda Chiri January 6, 2020 at 2:37 PM Vijay thank you my friend!;)

Mystic Rose Rose January 6, 2020 at 12:19 PM Beautiful tender expressions of love and faith, congrats on your win dear Brenda. Brenda Chiri January 6, 2020 at 2:37 PM Thank you Pixie so much! Your visit is appreciated !;)

L. J. Carber January 6, 2020 at 9:10 AM Congrats Brenda--love the last stanza! Brenda Chiri January 6, 2020 at 11:24 AM Thank you LJ I'm glad you enjoyed it!;)

John Gondolf January 6, 2020 at 6:44 AM Congrats on your win for this delightful sensual piece, Bren. Makes my heart vibrate just to think about it. Hugs, John Brenda Chiri January 6, 2020 at 8:19 AM Lol John! Thank you so very much my friend!;)

Edward Ibeh January 6, 2020 at 6:18 AM Wonderful poem as usual, Brenda:-) Congrats on your win! Brenda Chiri January 6, 2020 at 8:19 AM Edward thank you !;)

Pratap Roy January 5, 2020 at 4:24 AM Very good, Brenda. How nicely you express. God bless you. Brenda Chiri January 5, 2020 at 4:59 AM Thank you!;)

Caren Krutsinger December 31, 2019 at 1:07 PM This is beautifully done; so heartfelt and wonderful imagery. My imagination was quite happy with this read, Brenda. Brenda Chiri December 31, 2019 at 5:28 PM Thank you Caren you truly are too kind!;)

Janice Canerdy December 31, 2019 at 12:10 PM Whew! Where's my fan when I really need it? Great poem--very descriptive and red-hot, Brenda. Janice Brenda Chiri January 3, 2020 at 7:28 PM Thank you so much!;)

John Fleming December 30, 2019 at 8:25 AM Hhmm, hot...but quite as hot as that one I read this morning -- You are the queen of passion, Poetess! Nicely penned as always. :) john P.s Hope Christmas was a happy and blessed one. Brenda Chiri December 30, 2019 at 2:21 PM Hahaha! Yea that one I could not post here John! Plus it was a collab with a ALT rapper! Thank you so much John I so appreciate your visits!;)

Gershon Wolf December 29, 2019 at 9:37 PM Only the good vibrations, OK?! ~ Brian Wilson and the Beach Boys Brenda Chiri December 29, 2019 at 9:50 PM Lol beach boys said it much better!;) thank you my friend!;) you brought a smile to my face again!;)

Eve Roper December 29, 2019 at 7:23 PM very romantic and very well done like always, Brenda. Brenda Chiri December 29, 2019 at 8:01 PM Eve thank you so very much!;)

Gordon Mcconnell December 29, 2019 at 4:08 PM Nice romantic piece Brenda, so well penned indeed. Have a blessed 2020, Gordon Brenda Chiri December 29, 2019 at 4:11 PM Gordon thank you so much I always appreciate your visits!;)

Andrea Dietrich December 29, 2019 at 10:01 AM very romantic, Brenda. Wayne is funny down here with comment. Sounds like something a man would say! Brenda Chiri December 29, 2019 at 4:10 PM Wayne is always silly with me he keeps me on my toes! Lol! Thank you Andrea ur I don't know about erotic queen haha! But if so then so be it!;) haha!;) Andrea Dietrich December 29, 2019 at 3:58 PM It's good to be an erotic queen, I'd say!