At You

Let me at first
sight split in your
eyes
To see the look you
will wear on your
face.
Let me seize foods
and fruits from your
gullet
For three morning
and night
To see your mood in
this condition
Let me empty your
purse to water and
sands
To look up to your
disdain temper of
insatiable.
Let me pressurize
you under the sun
To see how vengeance
discomfort your
heart will beat
Let me knife you a
wound on your body
To witness your
impatient state.
Let me axed your
wound
To hear what your
mouth will
pronounce.
Will it upon these
tortures and
treatments
Withstand to
sonorously call her
name?
Or will it renounce
her name to a
worthless
measurement?
Endless is a love
that never resist
all odds;
Fall-out is a
weakling love
Which waits only in
all good accord.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 2/18/2014 10:47:00 PM
What a poem! Great write! I can relate in a way! :) Good, real good write!
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Date: 2/17/2014 4:13:00 AM
Well... Well... Enchanting - that's all I have to state... Good write Abdul!
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Date: 7/7/2013 9:58:00 AM
Good Morning, Abdulhafeez, -CONGRATULATIONS!!! on the 5th poem theme contest. always & forever * Linda
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Date: 7/5/2013 3:52:00 PM
Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/5/2013 2:10:00 PM
Congrats on your win very deep and filled with emotions. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/4/2013 6:44:00 PM
This win was well deserved...COngrats... Jake
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Date: 7/3/2013 11:20:00 PM
Congratulations, ABDULHAFEEZ :-) A wonderful 5th poem. thank you for choosing my contest........ ............. LOVE * SKAT
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