At Times I Almost Swallow My Dentures

I know a very special young girlie Who's caught me by the short curlys Known her for years Much joy and some tears I'll never stop loving her surely Promised that I'd love her forever From the first day knew that I'd never Betray her not a chance It's a lifetime dance This love's a forever endeavour Devoted to this loving relationship Not a chance I'd endanger it must admit This love is like gold So precious to behold There's no other to whom I'd submit She's the absolute love of my life Happy as a damn clam to be precise It's a loving adventure With this lady so tender The dictionary calls it paradise To end this story about treasures Something should be added to my pleasures Her lips are so luscious My poor heart just gushes At times I almost swallow my dentures © Jack Ellison 2015

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Date: 2/7/2015 9:01:00 PM
Well Jack if it's a good night kiss then just have her put them in the cup....Pretty funny...thanks for the laugh.
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Date: 2/7/2015 12:52:00 PM
lol Jack - your teeth are like stars - they come out at night:-) hugs jan xxx
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Jan Allison
Date: 2/7/2015 1:23:00 PM
** blushes ** my mum told it me Jack! Hugs jan xx
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/7/2015 1:10:00 PM
Now you're dating yourself dear Jan! That has whiskers! LOL Have a great weekend, dear sister... love and big hugs, brother Jack xox
Date: 2/7/2015 10:50:00 AM
Huh... Before you look at her lips... You might take out your dentures... Dragon's worried we might lose you... Silly Dragon... He's just expressing how much he loves her... Like tons of whole gobs... Tho sallowing your dentures isn't quite as romantic a saying as we know you're capable of... Huh... You Won't Really swallow your dentures... Will you?... Darn it Dragon! Now you've got me worrying... NOT!... LOL
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/7/2015 10:57:00 AM
We can never be sure in the heat of the moment! LOL xxxxx
Date: 2/7/2015 9:44:00 AM
Oh this is the problem Jack. But after all love is not to be chewed and digested.Love and regards>>>rajat
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/7/2015 9:46:00 AM
Funny reply my good friend!!! LOL Thank you, Rajat!
Date: 2/7/2015 7:39:00 AM
You brought a nice warm smile to my face...I can feel your love for her.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/7/2015 7:58:00 AM
What a sweetie!!!!!!! My dear wifey poo... we've grown old together!
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