At Times

At times I tell the most in mind
Thoughts escaping elapsing day to night
At times I close my eyes as blind
Absorbing sound vibrations passing by passing by

At times I spend inflicted intelligently gifted
Whirlwind words spin consciousness lifted collapse
At times I begin minds mend acknowledging indifference
Earthquake emotions humbly end recovered past 

Left hearted half 
Mind whole 
Controller Spirit
Not my own

Life at times for me may be may be
Normal in a small scaled town world scheme
Life at times may be one day
Be a life worth leaving to travel far far away
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 12/14/2017 8:59:00 AM
Super cool muse this power thought poem be, Kristina. And as has been said by me before: smart is always the new sexy. Smartly written prose. Depth of thought/simplicity of expression. Your words sure do wow a brother. Kick start the mind ... put it in mental seventh gear. Keep on dropping the love and knowledge, sista. Outstanding poem equivocating transcendency. Star bright write. Love and smiles forever.
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Date: 12/9/2017 11:07:00 AM
This is wonderful Kristina. Another deep poem that shows your gift for thought and words. By the way - That second stanza rocks!
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Kristina Whitmore
Date: 12/9/2017 9:30:00 PM
I agree I love the first line of the second stanza and am thankful for your comment James!
Date: 12/8/2017 5:46:00 AM
The mind can take you to places and summon thoughts that you though would never exist... It can take you to many places, but sometimes it can also fool some into misconception... this is a deep reflective poem giving insight into how your mind thinks.. done very intelligently..
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Date: 12/9/2017 9:29:00 PM
Thanks Silent One for explaining how our minds thoughts can be taken to places we never knew existed. This poem was my attempt at a freestyle in a way of a rap. I do not typically write like this which is why your comment about this one is much appreciated! XO
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