~ (~) ~ At the Waters Edge ~ (~) ~
"Chuck-chuck-cough-hack-chuck-hack-
Papa-gather-up-a-towel-shock-has-got-
him, hurry-up; "come-on; good-little-feller-
hold-on."
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"Where-am-I-feel-like I've-died went-to-heaven?"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"Struggling-amid it the-river had you
pulled-you out!"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"You're-a-Dear-heart-
truly friend, thanks."
"Walked down-for-
a drop-of-water... ."
"My fault she didn't
mean to you know,
I was-fooling-around."
"Guess I got cocky-
taunting-splashing-
stepped a ways in-
filling my vessel full-
I tested."
"Raging I'd say parched-
yes just as much she was-
carried me away with her-
before I knew I was here!"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"Didn't you know buddy?"
"Friend-patience, wisdom;
listens-tests the water most often-
yes-often-first; at-the-waters-edge."
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8CZb0DBeZSA
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