At the Tree Surgery

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at the tree surgery do i have abnormal fixation ~ or some branch of paranoia all other canopies stare at me ~ so bays this giant sequoia By David Kavanagh

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Alexis Y.

Date: 6/6/2022 5:35:00 PM

WoW! David, As usual, great one-liner. That tree is huge! Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day:-)Alexis

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/7/2022 12:15:00 AM

Thank you Alexis, what a place to be the largest tree in the world, surrounded by conifers, little wonder paranoia is creeping , cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/6/2022 2:43:00 PM

Wow those trees are something else, there's one with a tunnel carved out of its trunk somewhere in California. It leaves me in awe lol. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/6/2022 2:48:00 PM

They really are Tom and they live a couple of thousand years, one can only marvel at the healing power of such creations, cheers David