At the Stroke of Midnigiht

AT THE STROKE OF MIDNIGHT

Night had fallen 
and the twilight sky grew dark
A soft wind whistled
across the pine trees bark
In the silence
we walked along, not holding hands
We felt our love 
was drifting with the time worn sands
~
Clouds mingled high among bright silver stars 
that sparkled in the distant sky
We knew the time had come and lingered long
afraid to be the one to say goodbye
~
Now, when I hear the church bells
deep at night, 
I cry
For the love we felt so wrong, was right
When I hear 
the mournful stroke of midnight
I know it means
that he, no more will hold me tight

©N L B 
3/14/09
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Bird Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 9:25 PM
So sad dear one, to miss the love that you share can be a hard thing to go through, emotinal and telling.
Devonshire Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 7:54 PM
Beautiful writing, Neva! The last verse is so sad, but I like the way the church bells evoke so much emotion. Lovely!
Crane Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 4:30 PM
This captures such sadness, with beautiful imagery. It breaks my heart a little bit. Kat
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