At the Sound

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At the sound of the opening door 
The crows cawed a warning
A stray cat perched upon the fence
Meowed to greet this morning

The warm sticky fog touched each pore
Made life uncomfortable
How early in spring does summer
Appear so formidable 

Each plant contained within a pot
Cries out for moisture please
Like works upon the edited page
Call for a similar reprise

From old, old themes can lines read new
To modern generations
Let my lines ring within their hearts
A message to nations

The sound of thunder marked the time
But no lightning was seen
Like a comet always has a tail
Youth dream their awesome dreams

Some fall by the wayside consumed
Like seed pecked by those crows
Let God's message be heard by all
His love for man disclose

Finis'

Formidable__arousing fear, dread or alarm or inspiring fear or respect
through impressively large, powerful, intense or capable

Reprise__a return to the first theme or subject
A recurrence, renewal, or resumption of action

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 6/7/2016 7:45:00 AM
I enjoy reading your poem friend. Love how it was constructed and the truth within.......A.M
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Date: 6/6/2016 2:29:00 PM
- A lovely poem to read, Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/6/2016 7:25:00 AM
I think its purrrfect as it is Sara the imagery is lovely:-) hugs jan xx7
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/6/2016 9:49:00 AM
Jan, thanks for dropping by..Maybe I have finished now..Sara
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