At the Moment. . .

Long ago before many days and months,
At the days we shared everything,
There was a twilight- that
Noticed the things we did. . 

Other than that none spotted our chats.
And the allocated time to
Assign our remotely done works
There U pulled me unto u. . 

I lost not only myself but
Also my customs of originality
Never ever wondered it would happen. . 

We laughed, we cried, we played by
Imagining our every sweats was true
My nail marks in your chest
Your lip marks on my cheeks. . 

Could not judge it right or wrong- since
We’re paired as couples in each dreams
Embraced our weakest shape links
We got lost along the ways. . .

Never comes the days wherein-
	our hands together in my bed,
	your arms around my waist,
	our affectionate kisses at surface,
	your pull dragging my wrist,
	each of ours admiration and motivation,

	our doting numerous nick names, 
	a very silly fights
	and a tight hugs after them,
	hot spellbind looks.

	Lost myself in subconscious migration-when 
	U hypnotized my eye balls.
	whilst these all happened for abundant days
	including our mutual breakup. . 

Became conscious only after everything got over 
Every single moment flashed within a micro second,
when I saw u through my bus window at yours-where
U was found acting asleep with hands enclosing your face
And realized I was vanished at the moment. . . 
						~ Hannah
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
August 18, 2010 at 10:24 AM
What a wonderful day to be reading poetry of others. I am so happy your poetry is among those I am reading this morning Hannah. I wish you as I wish all my fellow poets the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. It is a pleasure to me to read my fellow poets poetry. Love, Carol
Mills Avatar
August 18, 2010 at 9:22 AM
Awesome and insightful poem. Enjoyed the read! Love, Susan
Hill Avatar
August 18, 2010 at 9:18 AM
There was a twilight- that Noticed the things we did. . I love that line..keep the ink flowing....TAH
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