Entry for The Metaphor Cup Poetry Contest: Sponsored by: Christopher Delegans Date wrote 1st April 26
The metaphor is lazy now; a mammoth, sloth-like grazing cow. Where once it cut like razor wire; hot spurting fat that hit the fire that boring repetition quenched; and all its potent power drenched. Now the elephant in the room the dreamy languorous exhume; because to have the wit to think could, conceivably, raise a stink.
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