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poem submitted to “Heat of the Heartbeat” poetry contest, Ink Empress, sponsor 6/15/2026

AT THE EDGE OF THE WORLD

Where the sky drifts into the sea a hush of spirit stirs the air. A doorway glows in what might be~ where the sky drifts into the sea. The soul leans close, remembering a truth too tender to declare. Where the sky drifts into the sea a hush of spirit stirs the air.
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Hind Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 8:21 PM
gorgeous :)
Wolf Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 8:00 PM
I like the way this hints at thoughts, but lets me, the reader, pursue them. Thanks, Sara
Kendrick Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 5:06 AM
This one reads like a good contender to me, Sara B., You have used a really nice carry through line. These are not so easy to write but you make it read seamless. Way to go. Sara K.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 9:36 PM
Done well!
Roper Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 5:17 PM
Nicely done triolet "The edge of the world" Sorry i don't stay in touch much. I am doing well. Thank you for your constant friend
Loving Iii Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 3:28 PM
This has deep meaning for me, Recently found the Opera Madama Butterfly. Maybe you know what I'm addressing.
Rolland Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 2:36 PM
quite brilliant poem, it could be true, i guess, enjoyed
Winter Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 8:00 AM
A brilliant poem dear Sara. Best, Anne
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 7:11 AM
Well constructed triolet. Good luck in the contest.
Sands Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 6:18 AM
Nice poem Sara. Well done ! :)
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