Andrea Dietrich Poet Dizain

At the City Pool

I’m sitting here relaxing with great ease

   since swimming laps here at the city pool.

         It’s Saturday and there’s a little breeze

            this afternoon, which makes it slightly cool.

               I’m feeling glad that Monday there’s no school

               and worries of the week are in the past.

            I’m happy too that I have time at last

         to sit and write a little poetry.

      I need to write some more and do it fast. . . 

   My sweet time into darkness soon shall flee.


Written Saturday, Sept. 3, 2016 for the Dizain Poem II Contest of Laura Loo

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Connie Marcum Wong September 7, 2016 at 3:42 PM Hope you had a great Labor Day Andrea. Anytime you can steal away to create a poem is fun for you, so it sounds as if you decide did! I enjoyed reading this.; ) 7

Daver Austin September 6, 2016 at 2:11 PM May the light be with you. Love, Dave

Joseph May September 6, 2016 at 11:02 AM A lovely Dizain Andrea...best wishes ...

Frederic Parker September 6, 2016 at 10:05 AM A reflective write my friend, glad to see darkness is fading..good luck with this contest

Len Gasun September 6, 2016 at 9:26 AM I'm longing for this wonderful time, to sit, relax, and esp., no school so I can write too :) A wonderful poem my dear friend. My pleasure to read again from you. Btw, just came back home this evening and I've almost missed the date: Happy, Happy Birthday!I Wish you all the best and the happiest birthday ever! God bless! love lots and Big b-day hugs with kisses from me, Leonora

Winged Warrior September 6, 2016 at 9:18 AM Great Dizain Andrea...summer is almost over...time to write more lol...god bless...^WW^

James Horn September 6, 2016 at 8:55 AM AD, And hopefully slimmer I will be. You forgot the last line. I am into limericks right now. Jim Horn

Joanna Daniel September 6, 2016 at 3:18 AM It's good to relax and write a little poetry, isn't it? Loved the easy flow:)

CayCay Godwin September 5, 2016 at 10:13 PM A just-because poem! I loved finding this ... CayCay

Tim Smith September 5, 2016 at 10:01 PM Enjoy every minute of everyday Andrea. It is nice to have some time to relax and write.