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At the Beach

Scorching sun Waves lapping the shore My sandcastle floating away
------------ 8th place in "Look At This Place" contest by Matt Caliri

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Date: 5/4/2021 5:09:00 PM
Out of 35 entries, your haiku come in no. 8! The little poem that could! Nice work in my contest.
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Date: 7/1/2016 9:05:00 AM
Amazing haiku....Eunice...skat
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