CayCay Godwin Poet Verse

AT RIVERS EDGE

Lessons scar marks upon a rivers diverse edge
when hungry bodies search there not just to be fed.
Twilight streams dream wiggles down upon each shore and
lullabies glisten from notes lit high up above.
Rivers float yearning histories like mysteries,   
easily in fickle-dark, nimble, deep waters.

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Carol Mays December 11, 2017 at 4:07 PM Love the magic and depth of this poem. CayCay Godwin December 12, 2017 at 12:26 AM Carol: You just proved that if one lived long enough, anything could happen! Since this poems conception for a contest, I've really sparked to it, but noticed mostly neutral comments and I didn't place in the contest. Such was my like of the write that I didn't care! To thyself be true, I was reminded by you. Thanks ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich March 6, 2017 at 8:43 AM Is this the one you said had no comments yet? I see several now including mine. Let me go see if it was the J poem perhaps!!

Connie Marcum Wong March 6, 2017 at 5:00 AM Your entry is unique CayCay!...Hope to see it on the winning list. I gave up trying. It is too time consuming and then to keep getting N/A's...Just not worth it. My poetry is not in your caliber or Andrea's either. Hugs, Connie

Andrea Dietrich March 5, 2017 at 10:11 PM Very nicely done, Caycay. Kind of philosophical while also being descriptive. Twilight wiggles toes is very clever. I keep seeing so many good ones like yours and yet he only gives ten wins. It's so sad! Sure hope you and I can make his list!

Charlie Smith March 5, 2017 at 8:55 PM Good one CayCay, best wishes in the contest...rkr