At My Cost

Ways are multifarious 
Let me choose
Light is seen dark
Without booze

Gift of God is
Felt as curse
Upside down head
Beautiful verse

Foolish  am stubborn
Stubborn so fool 
My hate invites me
Wisdom is misrule

God is angry
So am is lost
Perverse is prize
At my cost

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Anne-Lise Andresen

August 29, 2017 at 1:25 PM

- A beautiful creation we humans destroy ... I understand that God is angry - A deep poem of emotions, dear friend Bl - A pleasure to see you on my poems today - Hope all is well with you - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

August 30, 2017 at 1:16 PM

Thanks my dear lovely friend for your comment. Loved always, bl

Judy Ball

August 28, 2017 at 8:13 AM

God is a good and loving Father my friend. And sometimes, like all good fathers He must say "NO" to His children because what they want is not right for them at this time. Sometimes He says No and sometimes He says WAIT. But He has not forsaken us. Sometimes we have to go through hard times to learn something. Life is not always fun and it is not always fair but it is ALWAYS AN EXPERIENCE. What we choose to learn from that experience decides the future. A fine write my friend. God Bless, JB

Bl Devnath

August 29, 2017 at 12:35 PM

You are right my dear friend. i feel if we disobey God means if we do not do what he asks us to do, He becomes angry and as a prize we fall in to ignorance and then we with our ignorance think that construction is destruction and vise versa and we lose our real life on this earth. Thanks for your comment. Loved always, bl

Lynn Marie

August 25, 2017 at 2:06 AM

Tragic for anyone to feel such despair. You have penned the emotions beautifully BL and I especially enjoy reading this rhyme from you. hope you find time during your busy season to enjoy some happy, fun moments:)

Bl Devnath

August 26, 2017 at 12:37 PM

Thanks my dear friend for your uplifting comment. Always loved, bl

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