At My Command

Lost within
the writing
Found
with each retelling
The universe
at my command
Time and space
—unveiling

(Dreamsleep: January, 2024)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Greenhough Avatar
January 6, 2024 at 9:14 PM
This sounds so futuristic. The vastness of space widens possibilities. This is a very interesting poem.
Behm Avatar
January 6, 2024 at 9:47 PM
I’m glad you think so. Thanks Hilda
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