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At Least Try!

The courage to dare Or else beware One might just say "LIfe isn't fair!"

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Date: 9/16/2009 2:49:00 PM

Indeed, life isn't fair and the faster one accepts that fact the better for him or her. We still have to have the courage to move ahead as you open this poem with. So much truth in your words. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for taking time to comment on my haiku. Keep on writing! Karen

Moonbee Canady

Date: 9/16/2009 2:30:00 PM

There is a truism in this one... We do often blame everything and everyone else without even trying... Good Call... (Oh, yes Headed West is light-spirited... I was filled with mirth that day (actual Story) :) MoonBee

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/10/2009 5:30:00 AM

Excellent writing today Joshua. LOve, Carol