At Heaven's Gate - Part 3

Part 3:          AT HEAVEN’S GATES

To set Her free from destiny was far from my design,
but, though unplanned, I touched Her hand to give Her peace of mind.
She told me then, and then again, that providence Divine
had cast a curse, and even worse: despised by all mankind,
She walked alone, unseen, unknown, Her soul incarnadine.

To break this spell of living hell, of loneliness enshrined,
and end Her days within the haze, a sole redeeming deed
would give reprieve and maybe leave our destinies entwined -
Her final quest be put to rest if only I agreed,
but no surcease nor perfect peace nor hope if I declined.

The shadows, shawled in silence, crawled, the night Her fate was sealed
as vespers tolled across the wold beneath the muted fog.
The heavens cracked and sorrow slacked as chimes of children pealed
while in the hills (where midnight chills) there wailed a daemon dog -
with no delay I lead the way, the path to Potter’s Field.

Her weathered face was lined with Grace, Her eyes shone emerald green.
With me as guide She stepped inside to grieve and mourn Her loss,
and thereupon, though pale and wan, the night took on a sheen.
With weary eyes as Her disguise, She placed a wooden cross
upon a mound (unhallowed ground) and whispered ‘Sibylline...’.

A falling star flared in the far and burst, a bolide flame -
beneath the light, the Final Rite no longer hid undone.
And kneeling there in silent prayer, we seemed to share the shame
but could atone if left alone, forevermore as one.
Before we both could breathe an oath, I asked Her once Her name.

Through lips, pale red, She simply said ‘Some called me Abigail’,
and neath a birch where white doves perch, I took Her for my bride,
beheld Her smile a little while, but all to no avail...
Her cloak and cape, and shrivelled shape lie empty at my side...
for now She waits at Heaven’s Gates, not far beyond the Pale.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Horne Avatar
December 22, 2013 at 4:36 PM
Have just read parts 1, 2 and now 3 - wow, awesome write, my friend. Have a great Xmas
Mac Donald Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 8:01 AM
'Abigail’, meaning father's joy...somehow gives this even more of a sorrowful ending. The plot built up then burst, shooting out brilliant sparks.:) Enjoyed this story, thanks for sharing!! Mikki
Guzzi Avatar
October 31, 2013 at 5:23 PM
excellent use of meter too! Light & Love
Carrillo Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 9:05 AM
This is awesome. I very much enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla
Eastman Avatar
September 4, 2013 at 10:24 AM
You definately have a way with words and poetry. Loved the developing story and how you wove it.
Anglesey Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 7:06 PM
An exquisite piece of poetic art ( all 3 parts)written with talent beyond the scope of anything I've seen in quite some time... wow :)
Horsman Avatar
August 6, 2013 at 9:51 AM
hey i thought that i had read this,, in fact i know i have,, yet no comment, sorry about that,,, amazing story Terry
Duncan Avatar
August 4, 2013 at 5:49 PM
Such a cool ending Terry,,, from the first and second half ;} Thanks for liking my Great Swan ;} this is going to fav's ;}
Hendricks Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 3:42 PM
Terry, not often am I stumped for a comment. In this case I am seriously stumped. Impeccable in every respect: Pure genius, my friend. Fave, of course. Licia :-)
Kearley Avatar
July 11, 2013 at 11:43 AM
Gave me chills... Ha-ha. Loved it!
Beaufort Avatar
June 23, 2013 at 10:03 AM
Terry, this is a pleasure to read. It is amazing to me that you are able to construct such detail and imaging. Nice job!
Beaufort Avatar
June 23, 2013 at 10:03 AM
And so, an addiction ruins another life.
Kendrick Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 4:13 PM
Interesting work..It has great flow and rhythm to it..Sara
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June 13, 2013 at 1:01 AM
Another terrific journey Terry xx
Posey Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 6:55 AM
Terry, you have penned an epic work here that could well stand proudly with the work of masters. Great Writing. Thanks for sharing this with us... Regards..... Jake
Horn Avatar
June 4, 2013 at 9:02 AM
To me this poem was totally astounding Which made me and body go abounding And much sorrow was in my soul; She died and was buried in a deep hole.
Timperley Avatar
June 3, 2013 at 12:38 PM
Oh my oh my oh my...I am speechless. I am also breathless. I was there!! Wonderful write my friend and a priveledge to read. God Bless. Dave.
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June 3, 2013 at 4:44 AM
... this should have been published as a short story in a magazine, Terry. - I am glad that you shared it on P-Soup! - Thank you! - Have a lovely new week! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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June 1, 2013 at 7:49 AM
I am so glad I read your work. Now I am curious are you male or female as you took on both perspectives. Also with no picture and the name Terry I am left to wonder. Either way you are an uncommon talent and I feel priveledged to have read your work.
Omara Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 12:16 AM
You've done it again Terry. Beautiful.-Red
Onclaud Avatar
May 21, 2013 at 9:35 AM
the grace of this piece treads on the path of foreve, reaching to both ends of the universe.... beautifully penned!..:) huggs
Horne Avatar
May 19, 2013 at 12:11 PM
awesome write, Terry. Have just read parts 1, 2 & 3 engrossed throughout. Thanks for your comment at Whispers -will check back to see if you've posted there yet
Collins Avatar
May 18, 2013 at 8:30 AM
Poetry extraordinaire! From a 'simple' physicist you have delved into the heart of it all. bravo! again.
Collins Avatar
May 18, 2013 at 8:23 AM
Dear Terry You are skilled beyond comment. Your sense of perfect rhyme and story telling is superb. My gosh have you been doing this in lieu of reading my silly poetry book? Good good good. "Bolide flame" Only you and your talent to teach another term 'at heaven's door.' I will read this again and again for the gems I have missed in sheer anticipation of the next one. This may be my favorite yet. Thy 'think' not too much. love, Kathy
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